When my auntie told me my mom has giving birth to a bouncing baby , I loved how she called it. My mom’s birth took place in Ghana which is in Africa. I smelled the joyness in my soul. I tasted the happiness of tears in my eyes. I felt very jovial and all the way unhappy. And I thought of the newborn little and cute sister of mine.
When my mom came home, from the hospital it was very fun. A lot of members which where in the church of the Divine Healers Church, visited us everyday. The children in the church came to our house, and we played with a lot of stuffs such as dolls and teddy bears. When my mom came home, she had both sadness and joy. She was weak. She was somewhat joyful and somewhat not.
When my mom told me we where going to have a baby shower, she told me the baby shower was going to take place near a restaurant. When she called that it seems very silly. When you have the chance to have a ceremony or a big party near a restaurant you will eat anything you want. I ate a lot of meat. I smelled the sweet and the fabulous sent of eggs.
When they started the ceremony they named the baby Benedicta and she was named after my grandma. My grandma seems precious to me. My dad was very glad to have a cute baby who was named after his mom. All of the family members where very glad so they came and gathered because the baby seemed very fantastic and gorgeous to them. I love my family because of how they celebrate important events.
When my mom came home, from the hospital it was very fun. A lot of members which where in the church of the Divine Healers Church, visited us everyday. The children in the church came to our house, and we played with a lot of stuffs such as dolls and teddy bears. When my mom came home, she had both sadness and joy. She was weak. She was somewhat joyful and somewhat not.
When my mom told me we where going to have a baby shower, she told me the baby shower was going to take place near a restaurant. When she called that it seems very silly. When you have the chance to have a ceremony or a big party near a restaurant you will eat anything you want. I ate a lot of meat. I smelled the sweet and the fabulous sent of eggs.
When they started the ceremony they named the baby Benedicta and she was named after my grandma. My grandma seems precious to me. My dad was very glad to have a cute baby who was named after his mom. All of the family members where very glad so they came and gathered because the baby seemed very fantastic and gorgeous to them. I love my family because of how they celebrate important events.
AWWWWWW this a cute essay =). i liked it. GOOD JOB!
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ReplyDeleteRoslyn, I enjoyed reading your story. I felt your joy and understood your sadness at being replaced by a "baby" sister. Your family seems to be good people, very close and caring of each other.
I also loved the way you use language when speaking about the good will among before and after the celebration. Your use of language is colorful as well as powerful. Enjoy your sister, and keep up the good work.